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Can you see
the dark through my fingers?

Freezing feelings
behind false smiles
slowly fading

Can you see
the pain through my veins?

Bloody thoughts
fake reality
with only one illusion:

hopes.

Can you see
the destruction through my hearth?

Unuseful life
unuseful words
unuseful emotions

Can you see
the death through my eyes?
©2006-2008 ~xorigin
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!psylocke2k7:iconpsylocke2k7: Aug 29, 2006, 4:05:38 AM
madonna santa, fa un po' effetto, ma è indubbiamente bella
~xorigin:iconxorigin: Aug 29, 2006, 8:08:58 AM
grazie

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walking in my shoes
~jero1:iconjero1: Sep 30, 2006, 5:01:07 AM
mi piacerebbe sentirla urlata questa poesia hehe
l'ultima frase è potentissima

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"freedom is never the result of compromise" - ~nemophylia
~xorigin:iconxorigin: Sep 30, 2006, 5:26:19 AM
eheh grazie :)

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walking in my shoes
~WalterMB:iconWalterMB: Oct 2, 2006, 6:25:50 AM
Scorre bene leggerla; mi piace. Scrivi di più!
~xorigin:iconxorigin: Oct 2, 2006, 8:05:35 AM
grazie mille, ci proverò :)

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walking in my shoes